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		<title>By: NaNoWriMo: Quick Preparation Tips and Resources</title>
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		<dc:creator>NaNoWriMo: Quick Preparation Tips and Resources</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Oct 2010 10:30:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 6 Ways to Hook Your Readers from the Very First Line: Don&#8217;t stuff around with boring bits&#8212;get straight to the interesting parts! [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Iain Broome</title>
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		<dc:creator>Iain Broome</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jul 2010 11:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>All great advice. I have a thing about opening paragraphs and agree totally that they play in an important role in whether someone wants to read on or not. Especially people browsing in bookshops!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All great advice. I have a thing about opening paragraphs and agree totally that they play in an important role in whether someone wants to read on or not. Especially people browsing in bookshops!</p>
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		<title>By: Susan Fields</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Fields</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Apr 2010 02:43:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fantastic article - thanks so much! I came over her from Stina Lindenblatt&#039;s Cool Links Friday, and I&#039;m so glad I did. I&#039;m about to start reading Hooked and possibly redoing my opening chapter.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic article &#8211; thanks so much! I came over her from Stina Lindenblatt&#8217;s Cool Links Friday, and I&#8217;m so glad I did. I&#8217;m about to start reading Hooked and possibly redoing my opening chapter.</p>
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		<title>By: Martina Boone</title>
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		<dc:creator>Martina Boone</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Mar 2010 20:47:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just added an openings section to our blog with credit back to Write It Sideways for the inspiration. Thanks so much!  Oh, and anyone who has a favorite kidlit opening is welcome to contribute!
.-= Read Martina Boone´s last article ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://childrenspublishing.blogspot.com/2010/03/pre-submission-checklist.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Pre-Submission Checklist&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just added an openings section to our blog with credit back to Write It Sideways for the inspiration. Thanks so much!  Oh, and anyone who has a favorite kidlit opening is welcome to contribute!<br />
.-= Read Martina Boone´s last article ..<a href="http://childrenspublishing.blogspot.com/2010/03/pre-submission-checklist.html" rel="nofollow">Pre-Submission Checklist</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Martina Boone</title>
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		<dc:creator>Martina Boone</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Mar 2010 00:26:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another fantastic post! I like to collect passages I come across that really thrill me, and after reading this I realized that many of them are the first paragraphs in the book. You&#039;ve inspired me to add a new collection to the blog--fantastic openers!
.-= Read Martina Boone´s last article ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://childrenspublishing.blogspot.com/2010/03/pre-submission-checklist.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Pre-Submission Checklist&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another fantastic post! I like to collect passages I come across that really thrill me, and after reading this I realized that many of them are the first paragraphs in the book. You&#8217;ve inspired me to add a new collection to the blog&#8211;fantastic openers!<br />
.-= Read Martina Boone´s last article ..<a href="http://childrenspublishing.blogspot.com/2010/03/pre-submission-checklist.html" rel="nofollow">Pre-Submission Checklist</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: James Smith João Pessoa, Brazil</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Smith João Pessoa, Brazil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Feb 2010 21:51:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;If they&#039;d been any good, I&#039;d be dead.&quot;  The first sentence in an action/adventure novel I hope to sell.  I know it&#039;s not &quot;The great American novel&quot; but most of those are gathering dust in a drawer somewhere.  I just wanted to write something that&#039;s entertaining for the reader and might make a little money for the publisher and myself.  

I hope those goals are not mutually exclusive.  ;)
.-= Read James Smith  João Pessoa, Brazil´s last article ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://brazilbrat.blogspot.com/2010/01/ipad-fail.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The iPad Fail&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;If they&#8217;d been any good, I&#8217;d be dead.&#8221;  The first sentence in an action/adventure novel I hope to sell.  I know it&#8217;s not &#8220;The great American novel&#8221; but most of those are gathering dust in a drawer somewhere.  I just wanted to write something that&#8217;s entertaining for the reader and might make a little money for the publisher and myself.  </p>
<p>I hope those goals are not mutually exclusive.  <img src='http://writeitsideways.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
.-= Read James Smith  João Pessoa, Brazil´s last article ..<a href="http://brazilbrat.blogspot.com/2010/01/ipad-fail.html" rel="nofollow">The iPad Fail</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: suzannah</title>
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		<dc:creator>suzannah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 Jan 2010 02:34:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree, Mary. Too many characters at once makes my head spin!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree, Mary. Too many characters at once makes my head spin!<br />
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		<title>By: MaryWitzl</title>
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		<dc:creator>MaryWitzl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2010 13:28:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s  so true that introducing too many characters too fast overwhelms readers; it&#039;s much better to slip them in gradually, once the main protagonists have had the chance to hook them.   And finding  a long-winded description on the first page makes me want to go get another book.
.-= Read MaryWitzl´s last article ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://witzl.blogspot.com/2010/01/test-terror.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Test Terror&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s  so true that introducing too many characters too fast overwhelms readers; it&#8217;s much better to slip them in gradually, once the main protagonists have had the chance to hook them.   And finding  a long-winded description on the first page makes me want to go get another book.<br />
.-= Read MaryWitzl´s last article ..<a href="http://witzl.blogspot.com/2010/01/test-terror.html" rel="nofollow">Test Terror</a> =-.</p>
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