Woman writer thinking

When I first renewed my love of writing fiction several years ago, I had a nasty tendency to write in first person, present tense point of view.

I didn’t do it deliberately–that was simply the way the words came out.

It was only once I discovered first person, present tense is considered risky that I had to stop and ask myself why I was using it. Or, for that matter, why I would choose any particular point of view or tense.

One blogging literary agent says:

…[P]resent tense is not a reason I categorically reject a novel submission. But it often becomes a contributing reason, because successful present tense novel writing is much, much more difficult to execute than past tense novel writing. Most writers, no matter how good they are, are not quite up to the task.

I knew I needed a better reason than, “First person, present tense just comes naturally.” I had to ask myself:

  1. What do I want to achieve with this story?
  2. What point of view is going to help me best achieve that?
  3. What tense is going to be most appropriate? … click here to continue reading >>

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Woman lying in grass with laptop

If you’re anything like me, it only takes a few days away from your regular writing routine to throw everything in your life out of whack.

I’ve been in Canada visiting family for the last six weeks. That’s six weeks of sleeping in late, having all my meals cooked for me (thanks Mom!), and not really writing anything but blog posts.

I’ve been doing a lot of mental composting for my novel-in-progress, filing future ideas, and collaborating with another writer on an upcoming online project, but, part of me has been worried about the return to Australia and the return to my regular routine. … click here to continue reading >>

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Excerpt Peer-Critique Call for Submissions, Aug ’10

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My vacation in Canada is quickly coming to an end. We’re leaving tomorrow morning, but we’ll be travelling for several days before we return to Australia. So, I’d like to extend an invitation for excerpt submissions once again. Send me an excerpt from your novel or short story in progress, and we’ll give you feedback [...]

Excerpt Peer-Critique: YA Fantasy, “Shadowed”

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Here’s our fourth fiction excerpt ready for critique. You can check out the previous ones here: Not Quite, YA fantasy Feathered, YA fantasy On the Thames, literary short story As you can see, YA fantasy seems to be the most popular genre amongst our readers. Still, I think it’s wise to mix things up every [...]

Reading Recommendations for Writers, Summer ’10

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With August quickly coming to an end, I thought we should take a moment to reflect on the books we’ve read this summer, and recommend any gems to our fellow readers. Here are some brief descriptions of the 5 books I’ve read this summer, along with my thoughts on recommending them to other readers:

23 (More) Websites that Make Your Writing Stronger

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A while back, I posted a list of 23 websites and blogs that make your writing stronger. The post was, and still is, a favourite with readers. Since writing the list, I’ve subscribed to a number of other sites that continue to help me in my writing journey. They cover fiction, freelance writing, blogging, publishing, [...]

Excerpt Peer-Critique: Literary, “On the Thames”

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Here we have another excerpt ready for your feedback. Only, today’s piece isn’t going to be anonymous like the previous ones. I’ve been getting a number of excerpts sent to me for review, but the problem is they are all YA fantasy (even when I’ve requested other genres). Not that I have anything against YA [...]

What Should I Write About? Focusing Your Ideas

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In last week’s article, What Should I Write About? Finding Inspiration, I addressed a reader who was having difficulty finding ideas to write about. Today, I’ll respond to another letter I received, from a different reader: I’m going to my home town for the summer, and I would like to write a novel within the [...]