Excerpt Critique Call for Submissions, June ’12
…dialogue are formatted the way you wish them to appear on the blog. Include the working title of your novel/short story, and the genre. Tell me whether or not this…
…dialogue are formatted the way you wish them to appear on the blog. Include the working title of your novel/short story, and the genre. Tell me whether or not this…
…state this reason, it will at times be something you can act upon, such as formatting or other errors. If it’s something like inauthentic dialogue, you can learn from their…
…of the following techniques: 2. Use More Dialogue: Make It about People Instead of worrying how to fill those pages, see them as an awesome opportunity to breathe more life…
…their enemies. Use believable dialogue. I’m positive at some point my son must have witnessed a conversation between my husband and me regarding earplugs being civilized. In a child’s mind…
…if you’re writing dialogue and your characters can’t speak English properly.) Here’s a list of rules that both groups of writers agree shouldn’t be broken: Spelling: Unless you’re talking about…
…bit of dialogue typifies the type of exchanges that people are more likely to have. “Do you love him, Loretta?” “No.” “Good. When you love them they drive you crazy…
…still incomplete. Instead of being envious of other people’s writing, try to identify what you think they are doing better than you. Is it plot? Dialogue? Characterization? Perhaps the thing…